Nidhi, while some of your information was very interesting, it was impossible to actually get into your article because there are countless editing mistakes. As while as sentences that were worded improperly, sometimes confusing because of inconsistency. If you edit your own work, you might want some else to proofread. If someone else edits your work for you, fire them. Just some constructive criticism. But overall Your article was full of valuable information. As being a person that has close family with dementia. I truly appreciate the knowledge I gained from reading this segment. Best Wishes